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of
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british
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students at one
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university
univercity
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england
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who have
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to speak other
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languages
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english
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in 2000 and 2010 The part who can speak
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only, another
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language
,
two
other
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languages
parts increase by 5
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from 2000 to 2010.
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only and no other
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german
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only part is
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in 2000 and 2010. In the chart 2000
two
other
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language
languages
and another
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language
each
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with 10
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and 15
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. And
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only is the highest
portion
in
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in 2000. In 2000 no other
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, but it is down 10
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. And french only
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in 2010 And
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two
other
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at
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