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Both these charts appear percent of british students at one univercity in england who have ability to speak other launguage in addition to english in 2000 and 2010

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Introduction
Both
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percent
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 of
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british
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 students at one
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university
univercity
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university
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england
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 who have
ability
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the ability
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 to speak other
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launguage
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languages
language
in addition
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 to
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English
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english
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 in 2000 and 2010
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The part who can speak
spanish
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 only, another
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launguage
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language
,
two
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launguage
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language
languages
 parts increase by 5
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percent
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 from 2000 to 2010.
However
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french
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 only and no other
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launguage
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language
 parts decrease. And
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the german
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german
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German
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 only part is
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same
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the same
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 in 2000 and 2010.
Body paragraph 2
In the chart 2000
two
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launguage
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language
languages
 and another
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launguage
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language
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percent
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 with 10
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percent
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 and 15
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percent
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. And
spanish
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Spanish
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 only is the highest
portion
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both
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two
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 in 2000.
Body paragraph 3
In 2000 no other
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launguage
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language
 is the second highest
portion
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 for 20
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percent
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per cent
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, but it is down 10
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percent
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per cent
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. And french only
portion
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 is down 5
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per cent
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 in 2010
Body paragraph 4
And
both
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two
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launguage
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language
languages
 is the lowest
portion
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. It keeps 10
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percent
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 at
both
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two
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 years.
Conclusion
In conclusion, the charts show
the
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able
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were able
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 to speak more than 1
words
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word
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 in 2010.

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