The maps below show an industrail area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The maps demonstrate the Norbtion industrial area in its current form.
Overall
, the town
of Norbiton is to be turned into a residential town
. The bridge is to connect the other side of the river
. Also
, facilities for the people of the town
are to be constructed.
Presently, Norbiton is an industrial town
, filled with factories. It is located on the east of the town
and there is a roundabout that connects the south. Additionally
, many factories are built beside the eastern road. To the north of the Norbiton industrial area, there is farmland which is opposite the river
.
According to
the proposal, only the roundabout and river
will remain at the original site. However
, all the factories are destroyed to make way for several houses by road, a school in the east of the area, and a playground beside the river
. A shop and medical centre will be added as well. Also
, a new bridge will be constructed over the brook leading to residential houses which are built on the farmland.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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