The diagram shows how Olive Oil is manufactured. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The illustration demonstrates the
steps
and process of the manufacturing of olive oil.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the production consists of 7 Linking Words
steps
with a combination of human-tasked Use synonyms
steps
and autonomous machined Use synonyms
steps
.
The production is commenced when a worker picks Use synonyms
olives
from their farm trees. The Use synonyms
olives
are Use synonyms
then
cleansed with cold water by an automated machine. Once fully cleansed, the Linking Words
olives
are Use synonyms
then
transferred to another station by a conveyor unit. The next station continuously grinds the Linking Words
olives
in order to attain two products that are olive paste and olive stones.
The two aforementioned products are Use synonyms
then
bagged into a duffel container with punctured holes for air to regularly circulate the products. After some time, the duffel bag undergoes a pressing procedure to flatten and increase its surface area. The latter once again is needed to separate its byproduct water. Ultimately, olive oil is fully separated and the final step is to pack them and ship them out to any destination looking to purchase the product.Linking Words
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