You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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These pie charts illustrated how much money was used and received for children's charities in the USA in 2016.

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, donated food accounted for a large part of the category of revenue sources,

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the proportion of program services was larger than any others in the sector of expenditures. Focusing on revenue sources, the percentage of donated food had 86.6%,

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was the largest of

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sector.

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community contributions were the second largest at 10.4%, other categories were less than 1% except for program revenue at 2.2%. Investment income and government grants were the same percentages at 0.2%. Turning to expenditures, program services made up the largest part of

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pie chart at 95.8%. There are two categories, fundraising and Management and general, with 2.6% and 1.6%, respectively.

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people seek a lot of advice from family and friends when choosing their career. Others feel it is better to choose a career more independently. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

High school athletes should not fall under the spell of harmful stereotypes. what is your opinion?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign languge can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that it would be beneficial if employees worked three or four days per week rather than five or six days. Why is this? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.