The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
The above graph described the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
In Closures, in 2011 it was around 6500,
then
in 2012 it decreased to nearly 6000, in 2013 it was more than 7000, in 2014 it was between 7000-6000, in 2015 it was less than 1000, in 2016 it was around 5000, in 2017 it was 5000 and in 2018 it was more than 5000. In Openings, in 2011 was the highest at 8500, in 2012 it was less than 4000, in 2013 it was 5000, in 2014 it was more than 6000, in 2015 it was 4000 and also
in 2016, in 2017 it was more than 4000 and in 2018 it was lowest with 3000.
To conclude
, the highest was in 2011 and the lowest was in 2018 in opinings and closures lowest was in 2018.Submitted by purvametaliya99 on
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