The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the plan of a central
library
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20 years ago and now after a huge change during the period.
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, the space of the
library
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become greater than in the past with more facilities and amenities. First of all, it consisted of four huge sections which are located in the corners of the
library
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twenty years ago. On the north of the platform were children’s
books
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and computer games
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now there is a lecture room
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of children’s
books
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and
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computer games section become bigger than past and redesigned by two sofas.
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, it has become a superb space for storytelling events.
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, one of the best development of the
library
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after many years is setting up a café in the south which was an inquiry desk before.
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, the empty place between rooms was for fiction and non-fiction
books
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with few tables and chairs, but now it is a great section for all reference
books
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, fiction
books
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, and self-service machines which are separated by an information desk.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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