The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
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The line graph illustrates information about one specific island in the Caribbean which was visited by tourists in a
period
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from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of
visitors
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experienced an upward trend during the
period
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.
Although
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the
number
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of tourists who stayed on the island and those who stayed on cruise ships went up, the
number
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of the second group exceeded the first one in the
last
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two years of the
period
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.
To begin
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with, the total
number
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of
visitors
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, increased moderately from 1
million
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visitors
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in 2010 to more than 2.5
million
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in 2015. After that, it remained unchanged for one year and
then
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rocketed until the end of the
period
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. Turning to the stay location, both groups of
visitors
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witnessed a similar trend until 2015. The
number
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of those who stayed on the island was about 700,000 in 2010 and
then
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increased gradually to 1.5
million
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visitors
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in 2017.
However
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, the
number
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of the other group saw a slight fluctuation at the beginning of the
period
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, but it climbed substantially
so that
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exceeding the
number
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of the first group in the year 2015
then
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reached 2
million
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visitors
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in 2017.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, number, visitors, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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