You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visits you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say – What the problem was and when it happened – What the swimming pool staff have done about it – Suggest your own solution to the problem.
Respected Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to express my concern in reference to the visit I had last
week and to put forward some of my suggestions that can be helpful. I must mention that I am a regular client and want this
place to be of the same high standards as before.
Firstly
, the pool was so dirty, there were people throwing wrappers and stuff, no consideration of cleanliness and the water was so smelly as if it has
not been drained and refilled for many days. Wrong verb form
had
In addition
, there were kids in the adults section, this
was very alarming.
Secondly
, the staff showed no concern, they were fine with whatever was happening. When asked them to arrange some cleaning and take the kids to their section, they did not bother.
Additionally
, I would like to add some suggestions here, first,
the staff needs to get trained, special guidance is required. Second,
it is best to check the pool before opening it to the public, a deep cleaning of the area and daily water change is necessary. This
is not just for the club’s good name but also
it concerns the health of your customers.
I hope to see some good changes taking place and thank you for having an open arm for improvements.
Yours truly,
Sera SmithSubmitted by abid.srm on
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coherence cohesion
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,