You study at a college in the city centre. You use public transport to get to the college but the bus service you use has changed. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In the letter, -Say who you are and the details of service you use -Explain the problem with the bus service -Suggest what you think the manager should do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I am unhappy with the current 246
bus
services
.
My name is Sarah Smith who is a student at Victoria college
. I have been using 246 Capitalize word
College
bus
services
from Brighton to city
centre to go to school Add an article
the city
weekdays
for almost 2 years.
Change preposition
on weekdays
Although
246
route used to have four Correct article usage
the 246
bus
services
per hour, it has been reduced to only two services
last
month without any notice. When I phoned the customer service department, I was told that your company had to decide to minimise the number due to
a cost cutting
.
I believe that Add a hyphen
cost-cutting
this
inconvenient situation has been affecting not only me but also
other passengers who are relying on the 246 bus
services
. I could not even get on the bus
at 7:15am from Brighton last
Friday as it was already packed. Few
other people and I had to wait for the next Correct article usage
A few
bus
in the extremely cold weather and it was a really frustrating experience. I would therefore
like to request to have more services
for passengers' safety and comfort like it used to be. If you could proceed my
request as soon as possible, I would be so grateful.
Thank you so much for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sarah SmithChange preposition
with my
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