Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after graduating high school. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

It is believed that going to a higher education is the finest way to have a successful

career

, but there is an opposing statement that said getting a

job

after finishing high school is better.

This

essay agrees that attending university or college is more appealing than finding a

career

. It is crucial to acknowledge that

people

tend to be specialized in a particular sector. The Industrial Revolution has made an enormous impact on the way humanity works with information.

Therefore

, more and more organizations want to specify their products. In order to get qualified and pursue a financially viable

career

, degrees and certifications are needed to step into a high-medium level and more company.

Furthermore

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qualification we can get another chance without starting all over again. When we have achieved a certain standard and do not want to continue the course

due to

some reasons, we can always take 1 step back and choose the alternate which is more suitable and comfortable for you. There is a number of

people

who argue that

experience

is far more vital than

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degrees

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.

Experience

and enthusiasm can

also

play an imperative role in selecting prospective employment. For

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,

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is one of the trending jobs in Vietnam,

while

servicing is the priority of the

job

,

people

tend to go to an older and well-known

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. Another point worth mentioning is that study

further

costs immensely in both financial and time.

While

studying and attending expensive courses, other

people

might earn a salary and get

experience

which will be essential for their

job

security and promotion. It is the

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opinion that finding a

job

and earning financially is good right after graduating, it is too risky for

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long term because the brand could replace you with a younger and more productive worker and pay them less.

Although

experience

is needed, fundamental knowledge about the major sector is important too. After graduating school is the most crucial time in

people

’s life whether they will be financially comfortable or make a bad mistake in choosing their path. Higher education is

safer

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and more stable way to be successful in pursuing a dream

career

.