Your friend has a travel company and would like you to come and work with him. Write a letter replying to your friends offer. In your letter: - explain what you know about your friends company choose whether you accept or decline the offer • give reasons for your choice

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Dear Jun, How are you? I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to respond to your job offer. Honestly, I would be grateful to be able to work in your

company

. Let me tell you about the situation.

Firstly

, I’ve researched your travel

company

profile through the website and many people give positive reviews about your pleasant services.

Additionally

, the

company

has been selling flight tickets for 10 years, not merely tickets but

also

hotels, cruises and tours. As you know, currently I am working as an accountant and my working contract is approaching next month. Unfortunately, I don’t enjoy

this

job because it’s too monotonous,

which

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and

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I have to do the same task every day.

Therefore

, I decided to quit my job, and gladly accept your offer to work in your esteemed

company

Furthermore

, I have a keen interest in

traveling

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and used to work as a tour guide, so I have a lot of experience and knowledge about other countries.

Additionally

, I

also

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am also

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accustomed to planning itineraries and have good communication. Thank you for your offering, and looking forward to your reply. Warm regards, Lim

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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187 words

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Your friend has a travel company and would like you to come and work with him. Write a letter replying to your friends offer. In your letter: - explain what you know about your friends company choose whether you accept or decline the offer • give reasons for your choice

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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