The plans below show. Public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

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illustrate the detail of the

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that was opened for the first time in 1920 and has developed every part of position

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as the disappearance of the stage for musicians or water spring

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and increasing rose

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has changed a lot to better than before. Look at the detail deeply,There

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2 entrance which is the same as in 1920.

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top gate is on the

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of Arnoldo

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street and another one is on the

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of Eldon Street,after walking through the entryway will see a regular fountain in the middle of the

garden

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that has changed to a large rose flower

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have been moved to surround the rose

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of the plans,the pond for water plants and glasshouse is replaced with a children’s play area and water feature,and next to

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playground is a cafe

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old rose

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,there is an introduction of an amphitheatre for concerts to the west

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of the plan which extends to the area where the stage for musicians used to be.