There is a moral necessity today for the richer countries of the world to help the poorer countries develop in terms of feeding the population, education and healthcare. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Undoubtedly, the developed continents should provide help to the undeveloped
nations
, whether by giving them food supplies or organising free healthcare and educational welfare.
Therefore
, I would have to totally agree with
this
advancement for
countries
that are in need of assistance. There are several
nations
which are significantly suffering from excessive inflation rates, disease and poor capability to provide common necessities to families.
However
, financially developed
countries
are starting to extra-gage their
overall
help for the people of that country.
Whereas
I believe that advanced
countries
like the United States and European
nations
would have to put their faith in humanity.
For example
, giving them needed facilities, and normalising healthcare checkups would be plenty full for their livelihood. Even individual help through donating money would limitation on
this
dilemma.
On the other hand
, not only abundant continent but
also
private charitable trusts could
also
organise fundraisers for poor people, who are suffering from regular resources.
Furthermore
, underdeveloped
nations
should be focused on prioritising their education system first
instead
of other areas.
For instance
, rich organisations and foundations which are run by billionaires should at least have to provide common education to the young generation of poor
countries
.
This
approach will impact vitally to enhance their
nations
,
along with
the help of technology would
also
be enough.
To conclude
, even for humanity's sake many rich
countries
even to
this
day have given larger funds and assistance to needy
nations
.
For
this
reason and for humankind I completely agree with
this
statement.
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