IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7.5

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#two #tables #show #exchange #students #universities #europe #australia #summaries #information #features #comparisons
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The provided tables illustrate the numbers of
students
Use synonyms
replacement
Replace the word
replaced
show examples
 from educational institutions in Europe and
Australia
Use synonyms
, in the period of two years, from 2007 to 2009.
Overall
Linking Words
, it can be seen clearly that amount of
students
Use synonyms
 transferred from Europe countries to
Australia
Use synonyms
 was larger than the number of
Australian
Use synonyms
learners
Use synonyms
 hosted by European institutions in the given duration.
To begin
Linking Words
 with, in 2007,61 European
students
Use synonyms
 from
France
Use synonyms
 went to study in
Australia
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
 37
Australian
Use synonyms
students
Use synonyms
 visited
France
Use synonyms
 universities. Within 2009, the rate remain almost the same for
France
Use synonyms
's
students
Use synonyms
 and it went up by 21
Australian
Use synonyms
students
Use synonyms
 who travelled to
France
Use synonyms
's educational institutions. For Sweden, 34 were exchanged by 33
learners
Use synonyms
 from
Australia
Use synonyms
 in 2007, whilst in 2009, only 27
Australian
Use synonyms
students
Use synonyms
 were exchanged by 42. For the United Kingdom, the exchange rate was about the same
by
Change preposition
from
show examples
 31 UK
learners
Use synonyms
 to 32
Australian
Use synonyms
learners
Use synonyms
 in 2007, and 26 to 23 in 2009.
However
Linking Words
, German universities sent 27 of their
students
Use synonyms
 to
Australia
Use synonyms
 and received only 18
students
Use synonyms
 from it in 2007, and in 2009, German universities sent 62 to
Australia
Use synonyms
, and they received 26
students
Use synonyms
 from it. For the Netherlands country, they sent more often their
students
Use synonyms
 to
Australia
Use synonyms
 in the showed duration with 36 in both years, and they hosted 32 and 18 in 2007 and 2009, respectively.
Submitted by g0oo0 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words students, australia, australian, learners, france with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: