Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There is no denying the fact that
cohabitation
the young people
before get
married. Change the form of the verb
getting
While
it is a commonly held belief that they believe huge advantages for young people
it enables to
fully understand each other prior Correct pronoun usage
them to
deciding
to get married, there is Change preposition
to deciding
also
an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider to believe that cohabitation
is essential to improve life for young people
.
To begin
with, firstly
, I agree with
that human lives Change preposition
apply
it
undergo Correct pronoun usage
apply
with
different Change preposition
apply
feeling
some Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
days
happiness and some days
we felt pressure or depression. In other words
, understand
each other plays a crucial role in our life which is prompting to Wrong verb form
understanding
thinking
before doing anything. Wrong verb form
think
In addition
, we should be realized and value young people
when they cohabitation
with difficult day
. Fix the agreement mistake
days
However
, deciding to get married is important
way, they will be able to help Add an article
an important
relationship
to understanding. Add an article
the relationship
a relationship
For example
, if them
have Change the pronoun
they
knowledge
Add an article
the knowledge
to
Change preposition
of
Correct article usage
the development
development
Replace the word
develop
the
environment when Change preposition
of the
environment
was incorrect, they will be having huge advantages to get married.
Another point to consider, own of the higher qualities which is Add an article
the environment
cohabitation
with community
for Add an article
the community
other
. It is Fix the agreement mistake
others
also
possible to say that marriage enable
to several things recognize and intend to interest about family or Change the verb form
enables
wife’s
. Change the noun form
wives
wife
Moreover
, the
young Correct article usage
apply
people
have different a relationship, but family is
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
greatly influenced Change the article
apply
in
our lives. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, when there are undergo with a phase balance between the horrible days
and great days
, that can be developing emotions.
In conclusion, despite people
having different views, however
, I tend to believe that several young people
get married without idea
about Correct quantifier usage
any idea
cohabitation
. Include
, the quality to bring huge advantages which Wrong verb form
Including
was
Change the verb form
were
cohabitation
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