Some believe that tourism does more to create tension between countries rather than helping individuals better understand other cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many are of the opinion that

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tourism

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the tourism

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industry

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has created a situation in which its primary intention

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was to bridge cultural disparity has been supplanted by unnecessary conflicts between

nations

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. In

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there were some minor newsworthy incidents

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this

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negative

viewpoint towards

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, it has indeed succeeded in bringing

cultures

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closer as

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industry

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is generating a fortune for the hosts, meanwhile, these damaging incidents which are hugely publicized by the media does not paint the whole picture. One reason for disagreement with the notion that suggests

travelling

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the travelling

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industry

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has

deteriarated

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deteriorated

the cultural relationship is that

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often

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up a large portion of revenues in various

hospitible

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hospitable

countries

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, people's incomes are often dependent on treating travellers nicely and

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very accommodating in relations with them.

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often at least one-sidedly heals any residual anger between the host and the guest.

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countries

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such

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as Italy and France whose GDP is largely based on the number of tourists visiting them, are often regarded as

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hospitable

nations

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and the

resultant

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is that their

cultures

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are

renownd

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renowned

renown

around the world. The more

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tourism

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the tourism

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industry

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is significant for

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a nation's economy

the economy of a nation

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nations

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economy, the more

plesent

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pleasant

and friendly their inhabitants

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to behave and

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result

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their

cultures

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will be well-known.

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, even in the

the

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most suitable environments, some blips may occur that the disdainful may deem the end of the concept. Surly, some unwanted reactions can take place and

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further

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exacerbated by the media which are mostly

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internal or external factors like

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exhaustion

or misunderstanding between the two parties,

that

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which

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may wrongly demonstrate an increase in the gap between

cultures

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, these slights should not be interpreted as

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because exceptions sometimes happen. In conclusion, I would argue that in spite of some minor events which may

represnts

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represents

represent

tension between

countries

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as a result

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tourism

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this

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industry

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has brought

nations

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closer since it is not only a substantial source of income for

tourist friendly

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tourist-friendly

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countries

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, but

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they are in large accommodating their guests in a pleasant

maner

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manner

manger

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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cultural misunderstandings
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