Write about the following topic: Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Animal testing is an extremely harsh and tough
proces
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process
used by many cosmetic companies and other businesses in general.
This
has been going on for centuries. Many people have started to speak about
this
issue in the 21st century,standing up for the
animals
that have been captured and tortured to be used as a tool for an experiment. Most common animal testing
animals
are rabbits;
However
, multiple companies have started to use dogs, cats, mice and other
animals
more and more. People have started to boycott companies and businesses that still test their products on these innocent
animals
and have not stayed quiet ever since.
Nevertheless
, there are multiple other ways to test chemical and cosmetic products
instead
of killing
animals
. Some examples of animal testing alternatives are: Computational and mathematic methods, Al has been growing increasingly
this
past decade and is more than capable to come up with a way to t on these methods rather than harming
animals
. People could
also
use stem cell research, clinical research and plenty of other methods. Experimentation on
animals
should
outlawed
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immediately, As
animals
biologically
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are biologically
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very similar to humans and prone to
mant
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most
of the same
health
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healthy
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cosmetic products
instead
of killing
animals
.
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