some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities .others say ,this would have little effects on public health and other measures are required
Public
health
subject has become a common subject in urban societies, which requires some initiatives to overcome challenges that threaten healthy life. Use synonyms
Hence
, some individuals believe that facilitating sports activities is the best way of boosting public Linking Words
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others refute Linking Words
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point because of little effects it has and they think other steps are required. In the following paragraphs, both views will be discussed.
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To begin
with, physical activities play an axial role in improving public well-being. nowadays, Since people are career-oriented, they spend long hours in the workplace without any movement and after finishing the working time they become drained Linking Words
due to
their heavy workload, which results in various Linking Words
health
problems that must be considered. Use synonyms
Moreover
, some proportion of the population is not rich enough to go to the gym as it requires a lot of money in some parts of the city where they live. Linking Words
For instance
, in Tehran, should folk want to attend the gym, almost 20 per cent of their monthly income must be paid. Linking Words
Therefore
, by organizing well-developed facilities for people to do outdoor activities, the level of the population's well-being will rise to a large extent.
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However
, from an opposite perspective, having a balanced diet is much more advantageous. nowadays, foodstuffs consumed by the public include large amounts of additives and preservatives, which are carcinogenic in many cases. Linking Words
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, the popularity of industrially produced foods has increased significantly which is responsible for many Linking Words
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such
as obesity and cardiovascular diseases. based on a conducted survey in Tehran in 2020, citizens eat at least two portions of junk food per week, which is concerning. Linking Words
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why, not only do others like dietitians believe that substances which are used by the public must be monitored, but the government should impose a hefty tax on prepacked meals in order to make a healthier society.
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To conclude
, views differ when it comes to the way of becoming healthy. Linking Words
Although
many support the facilitating of sports equipment Linking Words
due to
the folk's low rate of physical activity, others, particularly Linking Words
health
scientists, believe that a hefty tax must be imposed on ready-made servings because they are full of unhealthy ingredients Use synonyms
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such
meals are becoming more and more popular among people.Linking Words
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