You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • describe the training course you want to do • explain what the company could do to help you • say how the course will be useful for your job

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Dear Mr Smith, I'm writing to apply for leave to participate in a training

course

for next month. As you know, I was always interested in

this

latest curriculum since

last

year. I have seen an advertisement publishing a valuable

course

that is

worthy of study. As we talked about in the meeting

last

month, our business should try to the development of diversity fields in order to appeal to more clients and expand our oversea marketing.

This

course

is called "Marketing Expectation and Insight". I have read the introduction to

this

course

. It totally matches our needs.

This

course

will start on 1st August, and end on 29th August. Because it will be held in Calgary city, which means that I have to leave for a

while

. My job will hand over to Peter. He is quite familiar with my job content. I believe that it will bring a lot of value not only for myself

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but

also

for our company. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Tina.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

172 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

professional development
training course
skillset enhancement
educational leave
sponsorship
reimbursement
knowledge integration
work efficiency
career progression
continuing education
team contribution
productivity boost
expertise building
industry standards
hands-on experience
networking opportunities
cutting-edge techniques
best practices
return on investment
in-house training

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