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The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the surveys of the percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of university in three
years
of
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2000,2005, 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the rate of good
students
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 evaluation in 2010 aspects of the university is higher
in
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 previous
years
.
However
, the range of modules offered by the university has
decrease
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compare
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 to previous
years
. A deep analysis of
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 chart provided reveals, 65% of students rated the teaching of quality as very good in 2000, and
this
 percentage remain fairly stable over the next 2
years
 . The electronic resources are
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rate
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rated
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 as good, 45% in 2000 and increased to 72% in 2005 and high in 2010
Although
 the print resource is rated stable
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% to 89%,
range
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or
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offered received a lower in 2010. Just 27% rated is
a
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good. The modules have a lower
precentege
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percentage
 of good
rate
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 in 2010.
Finally
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 the buildings and teaching facility remain unchanged in a good rating with
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a 77
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% good rating
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • results
  • university
  • 2000
  • 2005
  • 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • trends
  • responses
  • time
  • significance
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