The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the surveys of the percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of university in three
years
of
2000,2005, 2010.
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Overall
, it is clear that
the rate of good students
evaluation in 2010 aspects of the university is higher Change the noun form
student
in
previous Change preposition
than in
years
. However
, the range of modules offered by the university has decrease
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decreased
compare
to previous Wrong verb form
compared
years
.
A deep analysis of table
chart provided reveals, 65% of students rated the teaching of quality as very good in 2000, and Correct article usage
the table
this
percentage remain fairly stable over the next 2 years
. The electronic resources are Wrong verb form
rated
rate
as good, 45% in 2000 and increased to 72% in 2005 and high in 2010
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rated
Although
the print resource is rated stable 87
% to 89%, Change preposition
at 87
range
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the range
or
offered received a lower in 2010. Just 27% rated is Correct word choice
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a
good. The modules have a lower Change the article
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precentege
of good Correct your spelling
percentage
rate
in 2010. Fix the agreement mistake
rates
Finally
the buildings and teaching facility remain unchanged in a good rating with Add a comma
,Finally
77
% good ratingCorrect article usage
a 77
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