Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones Why is this the case? Do you think this a positive or negative development?
Some
kids
use their devices for hours every day, nowadays with drastic technological development it is being
very common for Unnecessary verb
apply
children
having
smartphones. Change the verb form
to have
Although
we could say that on a
positive side Correct article usage
the
kid
are learning new things every day at their fingertip but it Fix the agreement mistake
kids
also
it
makes them Correct pronoun usage
apply
addictive
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addicted
with
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to
stuffs
like games and videos.
If we look back a few decades ago when we were a child, we do not even know what Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
smart phone
is we will be contacting our friends through Correct your spelling
smartphone
landline
or through Correct article usage
the landline
parents’
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our parents’
phone
, Fix the agreement mistake
phones
we
had very limited media of communication for knowing any current affairs, but Correct word choice
and we
kids
nowadays know all the information digitally through their smart gadgets, by these
they are exploring and learning new things. Add a comma
,these
Children
gets
innovative and creative ideas through these smart devices. Change the verb form
get
For example
, BYJU’s an online application platform which enable
Change the verb form
enables
kids
who studies
kinder garden can do their schooling online just with one smartphone.
Admittedly, Change the verb form
study
Usage
of smartphones Correct article usage
the Usage
also
have
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has
negative
impact on Add an article
a negative
kids
. By
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This
this
growing trend of technology even though kids
learn new things from this
, it
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apply
also
makes them addictive
by spending more time on Replace the word
addicted
screen
, adding to which results in having eyesight problems at a very small age. Correct article usage
the screen
Children
use more of
social platforms which Change preposition
apply
enabling
them Wrong verb form
enable
communicate
anywhere around the world through one message, so they miss Add the particle
to communicate
to have
a real-life experience of face-to-face communication. Change the verb form
having
For example
, Children
nowadays relay
more on video games Correct your spelling
rely
instead
physical sports such
as cricket, football
.
In conclusion, Correct word choice
and football
although
using smart gadgets have some positive impact by making communication easy and exploring more knowledge through fingertip
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the fingertip
but
it Remove the conjunction
apply
also
as
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has
negative
impact Add an article
the negative
such
as making children
addictive
virtually with no physical activity which results in laziness and health issues at Replace the word
addicted
very
young age.Add an article
a very
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