This diagram gives information about the lifecycle of a butterfly, from the moments when it appeared till its adulthood.

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picture gives information about the lifecycle of a butterfly, from the moments when it appeared till its adulthood.

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there are 5 main stages in

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process, beginning with an egg appearance and ending with an adult

emerges

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, the beginning of a new life

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begins with a tiny newborn egg that usually appears on a leave. As the egg starts to hatch, an already full-grown, riped caterpillar shows up,

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is the next step.

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, the future specimen will not stay in

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form, eventually, it turns into a chrysalis.

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is the

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time , when it changes to some cocoon,

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there it will

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ripe and

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turn into a beauty.

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but

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least, the butterfly adult emerges and changes to its final appearance. It is interesting to note how

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specific species of insect , changes several times , just to get its final look.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over he world. Do you think this is positive or negative development. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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