The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
The diagram displays the manufacturing process of
sugar
produced from sugarcane.
For sugar
production, the process includes seven main stages like
harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporating, separating, and Change preposition
apply
finally
drying and cooling takes place. The final product produced is sugar
.
Initially
, the sugar
canes are grown up to 12-18 months. Then
, the harvesting is done. For the harvesting process, two methods can be used, it can be done manually or by a harvester. Then
, the harvested canes are crushed through a crushing machine to extract the juice
from the canes. Following
this
, the juice
is filtered using a limestone filter. The juice
is then
condensed by using an evaporator where the juice
turns into a syrup.
Finally
, the syrup is moved across a centrifuge where the sugar
crystals are separated from the syrup due to
the high pressure produced by the centrifuge. Lastly
, the sugar
crystals are dried and cooled for the final product to be formed.
Therefore
, the dried sugar
crystals are formed.Submitted by arnakaldybai on
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