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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals.

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Introduction
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color
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colour
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is
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direct
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a direct
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on
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an
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indiviual's
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individual's
feeling
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feelings
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do
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some
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focus on colour design
while
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create
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place
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a place
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.
Body paragraph 1
My
formost
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foremost
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,
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every
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generate
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generates
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their
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its
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 unique power or vibes in
people
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lived
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place
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and place
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Body paragraph 2
people observe
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the color
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color
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 in their
daly
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daily
 life , and
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are
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directly impact on person's thinking and feeling.
Conclusion
for instance
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 , white is
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a color
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color
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colour
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that represant
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represant
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represent
represents
the
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apply
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simplicity , peace ,
calmness
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 so that every place where we need
this
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 quality we use
a
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white
a
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color
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colour
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. another example is , most of the food company is use a red
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color
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 because
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it
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is
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it
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 directly
impact
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impacts
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 on
people
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people's
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mind
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minds
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 and
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increase
incrase
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increases
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hungyness
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hungriness

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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