The line graph presents the average closing price of valuable metals between 2013 and 2021

The line graph presents the average closing price of valuable metals between 2013 and 2021
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The display
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graph describes the average closing of valuable metals from 2013 to 2021. Monthly development of the price of selected precious metals from January 2019 to December 2022. The below data describe the given graph.
Firstly
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, In the green
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increase and
then
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decrease to 5. In purple, the
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increases
then
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decreases a little up to 6. In The red
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increasing a little bit only nearly 6. The yellow
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is different a little bit near 6. The blue is increasing. The green
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is grown too much compared to other
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. There are 5
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with the colour green, blue, yellow, purple and red. The data is given in index value about the
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.
To conclude
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, the above information describes the given diagrams. The data is from January 2019 to December 2022. The above information gives a brief idea about the 5
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in the table.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words line, lines with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "describes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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