The line graph presents the average closing price of valuable metals between 2013 and 2020

The

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graph illustrates the development of the price of selected metals from 2013 to 2020.

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, it is clear from the graph that all of the lines begin with 1k and the green

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was the highest trend during 7 years and the highest average reach around 12kk. Looking at the

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graph for more details, most of the lines had the same rates of around 1k between 2013 to 2020.

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, the purple

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suddenly went up from 1k to 4k ,

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it slightly decreased until 3k and went up in the middle of the year. What is more, the average of

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green rapidly increased from 2k to 11.7k.

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Aug 1, 2023

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The line graph presents the average closing price of valuable metals between 2013 and 2020

Historical objects should be brought back to their country of origin. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IBY, In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case?Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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