The line graph presents the average closing price of valuable metals between 2013 and 2020

The line graph presents the average closing price of valuable metals between 2013 and 2020
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The
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graph illustrates the development of the price of selected metals from 2013 to 2020.
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, it is clear from the graph that all of the lines begin with 1k and the green
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was the highest trend during 7 years and the highest average reach around 12kk. Looking at the
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graph for more details, most of the lines had the same rates of around 1k between 2013 to 2020.
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, the purple
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suddenly went up from 1k to 4k ,
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it slightly decreased until 3k and went up in the middle of the year. What is more, the average of
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green rapidly increased from 2k to 11.7k.
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