Nowadays traffic congestion is a major issue.What do you think of this problem and what measures can be taken?

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In
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contemporary era,traffic congestion on roads has become a major concern of every individual which is leading to global warming issues.As is increasing day by day which not only causes smoke and noise pollution but
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has a detrimental effect on the ecosystem.In
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,essay I shall
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, elaborate on the measures, which should be taken by every citizen.
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with,traffic jams in our country have a becoming a major problem that every individual faces especially those who are commuting on a daily basis.
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movement ,jam more vehicles emits smoke which is carbon dioxide and its causes major health issues for human beings and
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for plants
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the rise in temperature global warming is
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increasing.
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might decrease the transportation problem.,
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public transport like buses,trains and trams should be increased with a low fare so that everyone can afford it doing so,which drastically reduces the volume of transportation.public transport should be encouraged and private transport should be discouraged by the government.
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these measures would definitely reduce the movement jams.It's not only the duty of the government but
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of every individual and society to look after it. Bicycle riding is
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a good option nowadays electric scooters are parked everywhere in cities for commuting short distances.
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good for our health because it doesn't affect the environment nor it emits smoke and pollution so it's a good option.
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I conclude that it's not only the responsibility of the government but
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the duty of every individual to look after our environment because there is no planet B. By following the above guidelines we can surely cut off the traffic jams in an efficient way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • gridlock
  • urbanization
  • vehicle ownership
  • infrastructure
  • public transport systems
  • air pollution
  • urban heat island effect
  • economic costs
  • lost productivity
  • quality of life
  • public transport promotion
  • carpooling
  • rideshare initiatives
  • traffic management
  • congestion charging
  • traffic light synchronization
  • road infrastructure
  • cycling
  • pedestrian zones
  • smart city technologies
  • real-time traffic monitoring
  • electric and hybrid vehicles
  • sustainability
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