The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

This

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diagram reveals the process of

cheese

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making. The scheme contains nine steps

tell

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that tell

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all about

this

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procedure starting with raw milk and ending with the product store.

Firstly

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, curds are obtained from raw milk and bacteria reaction,

then

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these cubes are cut into small pieces.

Furthermore

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,

the next

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step

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is putting tiny curds into a vessel for heating and draining.

Then

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,

tha

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the

product needed to be extracted for salt to be added.

Further

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obtained mass

are

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is

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put in the

molds

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moulds

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to get the right shape.

In other words

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,

on

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in

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this

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step

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precursor mass is becoming the

cheese

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that we are used to

see

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seeing

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in the supermarkets. The neat

step

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is the longest, the process of fermentation

tooks

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takes

around two months to get

cheese

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ready.

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this

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the product is almost ready for consumption, only packaging has not been done. To summarize, the provided diagram shows every

step

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of how

cheese

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is made.

This

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process takes nine steps, and the longest part manes fermentation

and

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which

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takes two months.