The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

This

diagram reveals the process of

cheese

making. The scheme contains nine steps

tell

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all about

this

procedure starting with raw milk and ending with the product store.

Firstly

, curds are obtained from raw milk and bacteria reaction,

then

these cubes are cut into small pieces.

Furthermore

,

the next

step

is putting tiny curds into a vessel for heating and draining.

Then

,

tha

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the

product needed to be extracted for salt to be added.

Further

obtained mass

are

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is

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put in the

molds

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moulds

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to get the right shape.

In other words

,

on

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in

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this

step

precursor mass is becoming the

cheese

that we are used to

see

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in the supermarkets. The neat

step

is the longest, the process of fermentation

tooks

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takes

around two months to get

cheese

ready.

After

this

the product is almost ready for consumption, only packaging has not been done. To summarize, the provided diagram shows every

step

of how

cheese

is made.

This

process takes nine steps, and the longest part manes fermentation

and

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which

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takes two months.