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Countries are getting more and more similar as you can buy similar products everywhere in the word Is this a positive r a negative developement Give your opinion

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Nations are getting more similar to each other, because of the availability of the same
products
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 worldwide. In my opinion, it is definitely a positive development in a number of ways. Accessibility to standard
products
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 globally actually helps in terms of reduced travel charges.The reason behind , one might not need to cover large distances to purchase their
favorite
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products
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 if they are going to get them in their own country. It will eventually save them a lot of money.
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, introducing one's culture
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 other countries would help to get them familiarized with each other, so it will bring peace and harmony among them.
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, we are importing a lot of things from China
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 which people are getting more aware of the Chinese culture and traditions.
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Additionally
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 China government
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 combine projects like CPEC (
China Pakistan
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 economic corridor), to enhance both economic and financial development.
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, these
products
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 are available at
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 reasonable cost so people will not have to spend huge
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 of cash to buy them. It will
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 save time for people with tough
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beacuse
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because
 they will be able to shop
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 desired goods at their next door. In order
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, there are definitely a lot of positive points which support the trend. So I believe that trend should be encouraged in future.

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