The charts below give information about the people use public library and the main reasons to visit in Britain in 1991 and in 2000

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the library with five main distinct purposes in Britain in 1991 and 2000. The unit is measured in percentage

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, it is observed that there is a majority of visitors come to the

libraries

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to borrow or return books in both years. In 2000, those ratios all decreased accompanied

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by

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the appearance of the aim

borrowing

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of borrowing

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and returning videos

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at the figures in

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detail, it can be seen that in 1991, there was 65% of visitors

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borrow and return books at the

libraries

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that cater to the masses,

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amount slightly declined by 10% to 55% in 2000. In

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, people who visited public

libraries

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for obtaining information and studying are both accounted for the same amount at 10% in 1991. Despite the percentage of people who wanted information raise to 20%

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the rate of

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learners

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fell to only 2% in 2000 Turning to the remaining statistic, there was

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15% of visitors who visit the

libraries

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to read

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newspapers

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or

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magazines

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but

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sharply dropped to 5% during a period of nine years from 1991 to 2000. In 2000, there was a new era of borrow or return videos which stood at 18%

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in 1991 was actually none