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In most countries, multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#countries #companies #products #trend #quality #life
Multinational companies
has
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 a good hold and network in their market. Through which they
manuplate
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manipulate
 the customers, by
provideing
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providing
such
products
, pretending to be significant
their
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in their
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life
. As multinational
compaines
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companies
 and their
producats
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products
 are more and more prominent, in most countries. In our quality of
life
,
this
 trend is seriously damaging. In our day to
life
, we are busy with our work schedules. In
this
 situation, we are not able to prepare
food
 at home, which is much
time consuming
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time-consuming
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.
As a result
, multinational
compaines
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companies
 like Burger King, Pizza Hut,
Subway
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and Subway
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,
which
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apply
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are
the
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fast
food
 chains. Their main USP is to provide instant
food
 to
the
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customers.
Due to
which
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this
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 the citizens are much
dependable
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more dependable
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 on their
products
.
In
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To
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 some
extend
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, it is good
have
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 them as we have
satisfy
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to satisfy
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 our hunger needs, as we are not able to spend time
for
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cooking.
Further more
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Furthermore
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, we are able to spend more time
over
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on
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works
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work
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, which
is
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seems to have much
productive
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more productive
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hour
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hours
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 for our carrier growth.
On the other hand
, I strongly disagree with the statement. As these
fast
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fast-food
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food
 multinational companies are massively affecting health our health. As their
products
doesn't
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don't
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 provide any minerals and
nutrieant
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nutrients
nutrient
 to our body.
In a
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A
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 recent
studies
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study
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 done by
Food
 and
Nutrieant
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Nutrient
regualatory
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regulatory
 board,
which
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apply
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came up with surprising facts that
young
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the young
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 generation in age between 20 to 40 years. These people had high
cholestrole
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cholesterol
 and heart disease, they had adopted fast
products
 provided by these multinational
compaines
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companies
 in their
life
. In my conclusion,
home made
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homemade
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food
 should be given importance in our
life
 rather than having junk
food
products
 provided by
the
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apply
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multinational companies.
While
 cooking
food
, you know what all things are adding as
ingrediants
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ingredients
, as we don't how these multinational
food
 chains prepare their
food
to
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 us.
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