Many people believe that countries should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, it is argued that countries should produce
food
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for their citizen.
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, the
food
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products import less as possible. There are several advantages of producing
food
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to own.
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, I totally agree with
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notion and
also
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discuss
positive
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the positive
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impact on the nation in the ensuing paragraphs.
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with, the biggest advantage is that
price
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the price
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of
food
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produce
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produced
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would be less as compared
own
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to own
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food
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produces that transportation expenses, raw materials and other miscellaneous expenses were lower. As
result
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a result
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,
final
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the final
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product
made
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is made
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with
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at
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lower
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a lower
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price. Another
benfit
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benefit
is that Gross Demand Product (GDP) would
increased
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increase
be increased
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when the higher demand
of
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for
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local items.
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, in the past 50 years, India had
import
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imported
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wheat from the USA which sold
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at
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higher
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a higher
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price.
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, now India is the second largest democracy field
which
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apply
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produceing
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producing
produces
80% of wheat.
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,
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the economy
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surged
with
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by
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18% in the
last
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year.
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, when the nation
manufatured
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manufactured
manufacture
their
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its
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own
food
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products that increased job
oppotunity
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opportunity
in
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food
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the food
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industry.
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, Amul is the largest milk production company that
they
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apply
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provide a lot of job opportunities for freshers and experienced workers. In
addtion
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addition
, the countries
manufaturing
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manufacturing
their own products or items
that they
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apply
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research
about
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apply
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technology and
infrasturcture
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infrastructure
.
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, it will
helps
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to grow
economy
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the economy
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of the nation. In conclusion, import and export are the best way to exchange currency which will
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helps
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to create
strong
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a strong
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bond between both countries.
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, the benefits of manufacturing
food
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produce
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products
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are more
that
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than
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impoting
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important
.
Hence
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, I agree with
this
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notion.
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