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More and more people are using the internet to contact existing friends and even make new friends. Some people are of the opinion that this has strengthened relationships between existing friends, whilst others think the opposite is true. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, individuals use
the
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modern technology
that is
 available to
contact
 their
friends
 or even start new relations with others.
While
 some consider
this
 usage of the
internet
 to
contact
 people would promote
the
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friendships between each other, others might opine that nothing could replace face-to-face talking . I do support the first viewpoint, in
this
 essay, I will elaborate on my argument.
Firstly
, it has become a reality now to utilize the
Internet
 applications
such
 as Whatsapp, Facebook, and Twitter to chat or to talk with
friends
, colleagues, and relatives.
on
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 one hand, it makes people able to
contact
 each other anytime anywhere, and
as a result
 of
this
, they can preserve their connections and keep their relationships alive.
For example
,
friends
 who live far away from each other or even who always have work commitments prevent them from visiting or seeing their close
friends
, now they can make video calls through the
Internet
therefore
 they strengthen their connections as long as they are capable to be online.
In addition
,
those
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 who seek new friendships,
this
 trend brings numerous benefits for them
for example
, using dating applications are viral nowadays,
thus
 many have a plethora of options to start new relations with new people from all over the world.
For instance
, In Egypt, the recent analyzes of social relationships, say that the vast majority of citizens heavily rely on the
Internet
 to
contact
 their
friends
.
On the other hand
, those who believe that the opposite viewpoint is
the
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true
,
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 would argue that human relationships have been affected badly by
this
 technology. If there was not
such
 a technology, ties will remain in a strong condition because we see and talk to each other personally and regularly.
Moreover
, some talks should not be on video calls or phone calls
due to
 the significant importance of them. In conclusion,
although
 it is now common to hear a lot of voices criticize
this
 trend of using the
Internet
 to
contact
friends
, I think the benefits I mentioned far outweigh the drawbacks.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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