Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems, sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Despite the excessive of sugary

products

inducing

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detrimental disease, a myriad of people cannot encounter and quit these unhealthy diets.

While

some experts suggest that to mitigate

this

dilemma and instigate citizens to better dietary systems, the government should upsurge those

products

'

prices

.

However

, I strongly disagree with that proposal because

this

could be an impractical solution.

Initially

, increasing the

prices

of any product which poses a threat

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consumers, has not an effective impact on the populace.

Although

those individuals are suffering from diseases and side-effects that result from overuse of those

products

such

as diabetes, metabolism issues and being overweight, they cannot abandon

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diets. exactly as the eminent example,

while

a vast majority of smokers

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by lethal diseases

as a result

of heavy smoking, they cannot give up

this

habit and spend considerable amounts against

sigarettes

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cigarettes

.

That is

why I am incompatible with

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decision of raising the

prices

of sugary

products

.

However

, there are other plausible solutions to lessen those

products

consuming

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.

Firstly

, the concerned bodies should follow the safety and healthy terms.

While

asserting that

leballling

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labelling

systems and warning that those ingredients are

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should be consumed.

Moreover

, the safety and health organization, in turn, should launch

periodically

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campaigns, in order to spread

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awareness and cultivate citizens with the importance of prevention and preservation.

for instance

, it was tangibly obvious during Covide 19 pandemic, when the world health organization played a quintessential role by announcing daily instructions and

finally

the world overcame that pandemic.

Thus

, those solutions could be more effective than increasing

prices

. In conclusion, there is a public consensus that overusing

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sugary

products

has led to tremendous health crises. whilst I completely disagree that increasing

prices

is an ideal solution to encounter

this

phenomenon, it will be better if the public awareness has been increased and the

manfacturers

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manufacturers

have followed a proper

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safety and healthy system.