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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given tables illustrate the amount of
income
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 (in millions of
euroes
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euros
) from
sales
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 of
fairtrade-labelled
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fair trade-labelled
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coffee
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 and
bananas
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 from 1999 to 2004 in five different European countries.
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, it can be clearly seen that the
sales
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 of
fairtrade-labelled
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fair trade-labelled
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coffee
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 rose in 2004 for all countries where
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UK
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the UK
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 had a significant rise in
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category
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. Meanwhile, the
sales
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for
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of
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bananas
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 rose only in Switzerland,
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UK
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the UK
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, and Belgium. Looking at the information in more detail, the
income
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 for
coffee
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sales
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 in
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UK
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the UK
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 was 1.5
million
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euro
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 in 1999 and it increased significantly to 20
million
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euro
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. There was doubled
income
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 for
coffee
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 trade in Switzerland from 3
million
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euro
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 to 6
million
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euro
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. The least
income
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 for
this
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category
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 was Sweden,
only
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with only
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 0.8
million
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euro
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 in 1990 and it went up by 0.2
million
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euro
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 in the final year. With respect to
sales
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 of
bananas
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, the highest
sales
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 for
this
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category
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 was Switzerland where it earned 15
million
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euro
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 in 1999 and 47
million
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euro
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 in 2004.
UK
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 and Belgium had an
increase
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increasing
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 trend for
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category
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,
while
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 Sweden and Denmark saw a decrease in terms of
Bananas
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sales
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, from 1.8
million
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euro
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 to 1
million
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euro
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 and from 2
million
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euro
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 to 0.9
million
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euro
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 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, sales, coffee, bananas, uk, category, million, euro with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade labelled
  • significant increase/decrease
  • consumer awareness
  • sustainable growth
  • ethical consumerism
  • market trends
  • dominant market
  • comparative analysis
  • socio-economic impact
  • market penetration
  • exponential growth
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