The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care

their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting

the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about the percentage of how
parents
in a country spent time taking care of their
children
such
as dressing, doing homework, playing games, and preparing for bed in the evening in 2022.
Overall
, in all activities,
mothers
and
both
parents
together taking care of their
children
were
both
over
fathers
do. It is evident that
mothers
get dressed and do homework with their
children
more than
fathers
and
both
parents
together in order over 70% and 50%.
However
, for playing games and preparing for bed,
mothers
do not
much
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more than
both
parents
together in order over 20% and over 40%.
Besides
,
fathers
didn't take care of their
children
pretty much with all activities being well under 10%.
It is clear that
both
parents
together played games with their
children
at 70% compared to
mothers
and
fathers
with
both
just under 30%.
In addition
, preparing for bed was what
both
parents
did with their
children
at 50%, the highest percentage in 3.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words parents, children, mothers, both, fathers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • Percentage
  • Parents
  • Spent time
  • Taking care
  • Children
  • Evening
  • 2022
  • Summarise
  • Information
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Relevant
  • Patterns
  • Trends
  • Highest
  • Lowest
  • Activities
  • Gender
  • Conclusion
  • Findings
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