The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives information about the percentage of how
parents
in a country spent time taking care of their Use synonyms
children
Use synonyms
such
as dressing, doing homework, playing games, and preparing for bed in the evening in 2022.
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Overall
, in all activities, Linking Words
mothers
and Use synonyms
both
Use synonyms
parents
together taking care of their Use synonyms
children
were Use synonyms
both
over Use synonyms
fathers
do.
It is evident that Use synonyms
mothers
get dressed and do homework with their Use synonyms
children
more than Use synonyms
fathers
and Use synonyms
both
Use synonyms
parents
together in order over 70% and 50%. Use synonyms
However
, for playing games and preparing for bed, Linking Words
mothers
do not Use synonyms
much
more than Add a missing verb
do much
both
Use synonyms
parents
together in order over 20% and over 40%. Use synonyms
Besides
, Linking Words
fathers
didn't take care of their Use synonyms
children
pretty much with all activities being well under 10%.
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It is clear that
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both
Use synonyms
parents
together played games with their Use synonyms
children
at 70% compared to Use synonyms
mothers
and Use synonyms
fathers
with Use synonyms
both
just under 30%. Use synonyms
In addition
, preparing for bed was what Linking Words
both
Use synonyms
parents
did with their Use synonyms
children
at 50%, the highest percentage in 3.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words parents, children, mothers, both, fathers with synonyms.
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