The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives information about the percentage of how
parents
in a country spent time taking care of their children
such
as dressing, doing homework, playing games, and preparing for bed in the evening in 2022.
Overall
, in all activities, mothers
and both
parents
together taking care of their children
were both
over fathers
do.
It is evident that mothers
get dressed and do homework with their children
more than fathers
and both
parents
together in order over 70% and 50%. However
, for playing games and preparing for bed, mothers
do not much
more than Add a missing verb
do much
both
parents
together in order over 20% and over 40%. Besides
, fathers
didn't take care of their children
pretty much with all activities being well under 10%.
It is clear that
both
parents
together played games with their children
at 70% compared to mothers
and fathers
with both
just under 30%. In addition
, preparing for bed was what both
parents
did with their children
at 50%, the highest percentage in 3.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words parents, children, mothers, both, fathers with synonyms.
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