The bar chart compares 7 various factories that utilize ground and public water supply in a country. Data are expressed in millions of cubic meters.

The bar chart compares 7 various factories that utilize ground and public water supply in a country. Data are expressed in millions of cubic meters.
The bar chart shows information about the numbers of Ground
Water
and Public Supply that are used for some industries in millions of cubic
meters
. Generally, chemicals are the most used
water
factory, both from the dirt and public supply.
This
industry uses 430
million
cubic
meters
of
water
from the sand and 240
million
cubic
meters
from government sources.
In addition
, Metal, Paper, and Food/Drinks become the three most used groundwater. These industries spend
water
above 100
million
for their production process
whereas
fuel, textiles, and machinery need the least numbers of
water
from the field, under 100
million
.
On the other hand
, food/drinks and machinery consume
water
from public supply above 100
million
for their activity.
This
is inversely proportional to other cooperatives,
such
as fuel, metal, paper, and textiles that need public source
water
under 100
million
cubic
meters
.
To sum up
, it can say that industry only utilizes one source for most of the
water
that is
used. If one factory adopts most of the
water
from the sand, it will handle the least
water
from the public supply and vice versa.
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