The bar chart compares 7 various factories that utilize ground and public water supply in a country. Data are expressed in millions of cubic meters.
The bar chart depicts the different industries utilizing groundwater supply when compared to public
water
supply which is expressed in volume
(millions in m
¬3).
Overall
, the trend that is
observed is that, out of 7 industries, 5 of them utilize more groundwater than water
sourced from the surface and among these, the highest is the chemical industry with 430 million
m3 while
the least is the manufacturing factory. However
, the only anomalies are the food and drinks, and the machinery factories which utilize more surface water
than water
from underground. On the contrary
, the chemical factory uses the most volume
of surface-sourced water
as well (240 million
m3).
Furthermore
, the second-highest in utilizing underground water
supply is the metal industry where the volume
used is equal to the quantity of the highest used public water
supply. Food and drinks are second on the list for public water
used (190 million
m3).
Subsequently
, the textile and fuel only utilize 10 million
m3 of public water
supply making them the lowest consumers whereas
the machinery industry uses the same volume
of groundwater which makes it the least consumer as well.Submitted by anuvsim on
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