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The bar chart compares 7 various factories that utilize ground and public water supply in a country. Data are expressed in millions of cubic meters.

The bar chart compares 7 various factories that utilize ground and public water supply in a country. Data are expressed in millions of cubic meters.
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The bar chart depicts the different industries utilizing groundwater supply when compared to public
water
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 supply which is expressed in
volume
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 (millions in
m
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¬3).
Overall
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, the trend
that is
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 observed is that, out of 7 industries, 5 of them utilize more groundwater than
water
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 sourced from the surface and among these, the highest is the chemical industry with 430
million
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 m3
while
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 the least is the manufacturing factory.
However
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, the only anomalies are the food and drinks, and the machinery factories which utilize more surface
water
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 than
water
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 from underground.
On the contrary
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, the chemical factory uses the most
volume
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 of surface-sourced
water
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 as well (240
million
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 m3).
Furthermore
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, the second-highest in utilizing underground
water
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 supply is the metal industry where the
volume
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 used is equal to the quantity of the highest used public
water
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 supply. Food and drinks are second on the list for public
water
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 used (190
million
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 m3).
Subsequently
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, the textile and fuel only utilize 10
million
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 m3 of public
water
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 supply making them the lowest consumers
whereas
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 the machinery industry uses the same
volume
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 of groundwater which makes it the least consumer as well.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, volume, million, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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