The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.
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The two maps illustrate the site of Lynwich
College
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in the year 2006 and now.
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, the Cafeteria is built at the centre of the
college
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, the car park is abridged, and there is bike storage added. On the South-west side the trees are removed from the map and the Library is constructed, having access to
College
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buildings 1 and 2.
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, the Cafeteria at the centre works as a junction connecting almost every path
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as the
College
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buildings on the West and South, the Bus stop on the North, and the Car park and Sports Centre on the East and North-East respectively all through the interval.
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, on the North side, the bus stop is newly built nearby the road. In the same way, the sports field is expanded and made larger than the other available amenities.
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, the size and location of the building remained unchanged throughout the period.
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, in the past(2006),the size of the trees was enormous but now they are smaller or newly planted.
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