The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.
The two maps illustrate the site of Lynwich
College
in the year 2006 and now.
Overall
, the Cafeteria is built at the centre of the
college
, the car park is abridged, and there is bike storage added. On the South-west side the trees are removed from the map and the Library is constructed, having access to
College
buildings 1 and 2.
Additionally
, the Cafeteria at the centre works as a junction connecting almost every path
such
as the
College
buildings on the West and South, the Bus stop on the North, and the Car park and Sports Centre on the East and North-East respectively all through the interval.
Furthermore
, on the North side, the bus stop is newly built nearby the road. In the same way, the sports field is expanded and made larger than the other available amenities.
However
, the size and location of the building remained unchanged throughout the period.
Similarly
, in the past(2006),the size of the trees was enormous but now they are smaller or newly planted.
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