You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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chart
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Indonesia
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Kong
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on the other hand
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Kong
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country
with the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
in Use synonyms
Australia
. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
bar
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chart
highlights the changing trends in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
from different Use synonyms
countries
selecting Use synonyms
Australia
as their preferred destination for overseas education.In summary, the Use synonyms
bar
Use synonyms
chart
provides information on the Use synonyms
number
of overseas Use synonyms
students
from four different Use synonyms
countries
(Use synonyms
Indonesia
, Use synonyms
Hong
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Kong
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Australia
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Malaysia
had the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
in Use synonyms
Australia
at the beginning of 1982, surpassing the other Use synonyms
countries
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Linking Words
Malaysian
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student
numbers increased in 1982 and 1984, they remained steady from 1988 onwards. Notably, there was a significant surge in Use synonyms
Malaysian
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student
Use synonyms
admissions
in 1994 and 1997. Use synonyms
Indonesia
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also
saw a steady increase in Linking Words
student
Use synonyms
admissions
from 1982 to 1994. The Use synonyms
number
of Indonesian Use synonyms
students
experienced a remarkable rise in 1994, reaching its peak in 1998 and making Use synonyms
Indonesia
the Use synonyms
country
with the most Use synonyms
students
in Use synonyms
Australia
. Use synonyms
Hong
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Kong
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on the other hand
, had no Linking Words
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admissions
until 1997. Use synonyms
However
, after that, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
students
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Indonesia
and Use synonyms
Malaysia
. By 1993, Use synonyms
Hong
Use synonyms
Kong
became the Use synonyms
country
with the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
in Use synonyms
Australia
. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
bar
Use synonyms
chart
highlights the changing trends in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
from different Use synonyms
countries
selecting Use synonyms
Australia
as their preferred destination for overseas education. The data shows that Use synonyms
Malaysia
had the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
in Use synonyms
Australia
at the beginning of 1982, surpassing the other Use synonyms
countries
. Use synonyms
Although
Linking Words
Malaysian
Use synonyms
student
numbers increased in 1982 and 1984, they remained steady from 1988 onwards. Notably, there was a significant surge in Use synonyms
Malaysian
Use synonyms
student
Use synonyms
admissions
in 1994 and 1997. Use synonyms
Indonesia
Use synonyms
also
saw a steady increase in Linking Words
student
Use synonyms
admissions
from 1982 to 1994. The Use synonyms
number
of Indonesian Use synonyms
students
experienced a remarkable rise in 1994, reaching its peak in 1998 and making Use synonyms
Indonesia
the Use synonyms
country
with the most Use synonyms
students
in Use synonyms
Australia
. Use synonyms
Hong
Use synonyms
Kong
, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, had no Linking Words
student
Use synonyms
admissions
until 1997. Use synonyms
However
, after that, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
students
swiftly rose and exceeded both Use synonyms
Indonesia
and Use synonyms
Malaysia
. By 1993, Use synonyms
Hong
Use synonyms
Kong
became the Use synonyms
country
with the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
in Use synonyms
Australia
. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
bar
Use synonyms
chart
highlights the changing trends in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
from different Use synonyms
countries
selecting Use synonyms
Australia
as their preferred destination for overseas education.Use synonyms
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bar, chart, number, students, countries, indonesia, hong, kong, malaysia, student, admissions, country, australia, malaysian with synonyms.
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