The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
The charts provide data relating to the comparison of the
population
pyramids of India and
France
in 1984.
Overall
, it is obvious that the younger generations of India represented an enormous
proportion
of the
population
and the
population
decreased over the ages
whereas
the
population
of
France
levelled off until the quadragenarians’
index
. It is conspicuous that there was a gradual rise in the
population
of
France
commencing from 0-5 to 30-35 in both genders, except for a small dip in the
index
of females, who are 5-10 years. The
proportion
of people who are 30-35
together with
10 to 20 aged men culminated at 4%, the highest of any category in
France
. It is noteworthy that after the quadragenarians'
proportion
, the
population
of seniors decreased and males’
index
was lower than females in all age brackets from 35-40 to 85 and above. It is interesting to note that the older the people got, the smaller the
proportion
became in India in 1984.
Furthermore
, there was the highest peak in the
population
of toddlers depicted at 7% and just over 6% for boys and girls respectively. Seniors who are between 65 and 70 represented an all-time low
index
providing just below 1% in all gender.
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  • charts
  • age structure
  • populations
  • France
  • India
  • 1984
  • overall
  • different
  • evenly distributed
  • proportion
  • young people
  • elderly individuals
  • largest age group
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