The diagram provides information about the growth trend of four modern technologies over the last six years.
The diagram provides information about the
growth
trend of four modern technologies over the last
six years.
There are basically two types of growth
: upward and downward. For example
, in this
six years, CD players Correct determiner usage
these
haves
only upwards.
In Correct your spelling
have
this
six years , internet access didn't sprout more than fifty Correct determiner usage
these
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
however
CD players gave the greatest Add the comma(s)
,however
growth
of all , they upward more than eighty percent
.
The others Change the spelling
per cent
also
gave growth
, but not more than CD player and not less than internet access.Submitted by dnm.best on
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