The diagram provides information about the growth trend of four modern technologies over the last six years.

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The diagram provides information about the

growth

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trend of four modern technologies over the

last

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six years. There are basically two types of

growth

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: upward and downward.

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, in

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this

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these

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six years, CD players

haves

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have

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only upwards. In

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this

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these

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six years , internet access didn't sprout more than fifty

percent

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per cent

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however

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,however

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CD players gave the greatest

growth

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of all , they upward more than eighty

percent

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per cent

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. The others

also

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gave

growth

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, but not more than CD player and not less than internet access.

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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

85 words

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The diagram provides information about the growth trend of four modern technologies over the last six years.

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