The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

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The table provides information about the

population

figures for four countries for 2003 and projected for 2025 and 2050.

Overall

it is clear that

the rate of

population

in Indonesia is highest during three years and in 2025 it will be highest at about 312 than in 2003 and 2025. Looking at the table for more detail, in 2003, the

population

of fingers was lowest in Argentina about 34.

Then

, it will slightly increase to 48 in 2025 and to 62 in 2050. What is more, in Italy , it slowly drops from 54 to 45 during these three years.

Moreover

, the average

population

in the Republic of Korea was 48 in 2003 and will steadily go up to 52. After that , it will not change in 2025 and 2050.

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