In today’s time the internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinions.

#today’s #time #internet #study #home #prefer #courses #classroom #education

Numerous people have an opinion that these days

study

Wrong verb form

studying

show examples

from home has

becoming

Change the verb form

become

show examples

accessible

own

Correct your spelling

show examples

Add an article

the internet

show examples

internet

Capitalize word

Internet

show examples

from student residences.

However

, others argue that

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

online courses are more beneficial to be studied. In my opinion, attending lectures from home through internet access is far more considerable than virtual education. In conclusion,

although

I accept that virtual education has its own considerations. I accept that

study

Replace the word

studying

show examples

via

Add an article

the internet

show examples

internet

Capitalize word

Internet

show examples

is more acceptable.

Submitted by rajwinder85913 on Wed Aug 02 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

71 words

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
) Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Youngsters are the backbone of every economy. A part of society believes that young people should take part in some voluntary work for the welfare of society while, others reject this notion. Honestly, I partially agree with the above testimonial. Therefore, I will explicate the reasons behind this viewpoint in upcoming paragraphs thus will lead to a logical conclusion as well.
7
band
Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.
It is believed by people that the most significant aspect of wealth is the ability to serve others. I totally agree with this statement and believe that opulent people can provide free education and job opportunities to others.
<4
band
Despite a large quantity of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays one of our mean problem is having large number of gyms but sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the world . And this result of people who don’t favor gym and people have problems with their mental health or just because they’re in depression.
4.5
band
In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Agriculture has made the advances to the world, while there still are many individuals face the shortages of food. In this essay, I will anaylse the possible factors and offer my personal solution.
4
band
"Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV has bad influences, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media." Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion.
There is no different type of objective fact that this statement about some people thinking the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV has bad influences is prevalent in our reality becuse of its importance. Most people agree with this statement because of its many benefits. Some of the people highlight its disadvantege. I would like to discuss about the advantages and the disadvantages of the statament in my next paragraphes.

In today’s time the internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinions.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

) Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.

Despite a large quantity of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

"Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV has bad influences, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media." Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion.