The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart shows how the fee for
copper
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,
nickel
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, and
zinc
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changed each month in 2014.
Copper
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and
nickel
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bill
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bills
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went down
overall
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,
while
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zinc
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valuation went up slightly.
Nickel
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had the most significant price fluctuations between months. In January 2014,
nickel
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return inc
reased
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released
by 6% compared to the previous month, which was higher than
copper
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(2%) and
zinc
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(1%).
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,
nickel
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estimate
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estimates
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dropped to 1% by March and reached a low of -3% by June. The changes for
copper
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and
zinc
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were less dramatic, with
zinc
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seeing a 3% increase in February before a downward trend for the first half of the year.
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Copper
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The copper
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rate
also
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fell, mostly staying around 1% to -1%. In the second half of the stage,
nickel
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prices continued to decline, except for a 1% increase
at the end
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of the time.
Copper
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cost remained stable at around 1% from July onwards, with a small increase in December.
Zinc
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payment had a slight drop of 0.5% for most of the latter part of the year, followed by a surge of 2% in December, which was the highest point reached among all the minerals’
tariff
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tariffs
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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