It
is thinkChange the verb form
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that young ages who started to go to
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university
,Remove the comma
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should spend
freeCorrect pronoun usage
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time to
applyAdd the preposition
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theCorrect article usage
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.
I argue that, I totally agreed that teenagers can be allowed to experience
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earning activities.
The first reason is gaining opportunities when they graduated
theirChange preposition
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course. Working before beginning
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university is one of the
most Correct quantifier usage
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experiences
helpCorrect pronoun usage
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with their development. Attending
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earning activities
inChange preposition
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theCorrect article usage
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period of
longChange the article
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time is better than the one who didn’t use to employ any
jobsFix the agreement mistake
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.
, they can make the social relation to invest
theirChange preposition
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careers.
,
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adolescenceReplace the word
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, who be able to
makingChange the verb
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profits, can afford to their independent life.
The second reason, they don’t need to depend on their parent’s finance. Applying
inChange preposition
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theCorrect article usage
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part-time
helpCorrect subject-verb agreement
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them to pay several costs
as eating, renting housing,
shoppingCorrect word choice
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. They
gain
a knowledgeRemove the article
knowledge
a piece of knowledge
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enough for later.
, they will learn
proceduresCorrect article usage
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of the management balance.
, the current generations who joined the
, can
startedChange the verb form
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up their business more
successfulChange the word
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than the past generations.
, they will
successReplace the word
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more early than the same age.
In conclusion, enrolment the
not only
improvementReplace the word
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themselves
,Remove the comma
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but
creatingWrong verb form
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a new step in
developmentCorrect article usage
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ourChange preposition
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society. In my opinion, the government
embark
toChange preposition
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encouraging the students in taking part in
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earning activities.