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Machines have replaced physical work in many industries. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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With the development of technology,
machines
 gradually replace humans in more and more
fields
. In my view, the potential drawbacks of
machines
 are negligible compared to their strengths.
Machines
 can reduce periodic work and generate more benefits in industries. If
machines
 do the physical work in industries, companies can hire fewer workers which can cut budgets in manufacturing and dispose more money in designing and advertising processes. It will definitely make products more creative and appealing and bring more income.
Moreover
, in most situations, the products manufactured by
machines
are always have
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 higher quality because of that
machines
 are more precise than manually produced ones.
Machines
 can always reduce the probability of injury, particularly in some
fields
 that are dangerous and required skills.
Machines
 are programmed so they are less easily to make mistakes than humans.
Moreover
, even though some accidents happen, the worst situation is that
machines
 are destroyed.
However
, compared with human injury or even deceased, the results are much less.
In
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 the other hand, we should admit in some particular
fields
,
machines
 sometimes cannot reach the demands.
For example
,in rocket manufacturing, there are some welding works
have
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 to
completed
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 by
skillful
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 workers rather than
machines
 because some workers can complete an extremely high precision. In conclusion, I do believe that in most
fields
,
machines
 can dominate the manufacturing process, especially for physical and periodical processes.
However
, we should
also
 realize that sometimes humans can
also
 win over
machines
.
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