You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter - give details of your course - explain why you need a week off - say what you want the Principal to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Ajaib and I am an Engineering student at your University. I am writing

this

letter regarding my permission to take a week off

for

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the current Physics course. Allow me to explain the details.

Firstly

, I am currently taking a physics course

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taught by Prof. John.

In addition

this

course is 4 times a week

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this

semester.

Secondly

, I had requested

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Prof. John to take a week off that start from next Monday. Unfortunately, Prof. John did not accept my permission. During my absence, I should

back

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Canada next Monday because both of my parents had an accident which I

told

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by my neighbour.

Consequently

, I must come to Canada to visit my parents as soon as possible. I kindly ask for your assistance with my prompt. I would like your help to resolve my absences for

this

issue. Yours Sincerely, Ajaib

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

158 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter - give details of your course - explain why you need a week off - say what you want the Principal to do.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their home town. Do the advantages of learning a new language in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example, working for a charity improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).