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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter - give details of your course - explain why you need a week off - say what you want the Principal to do.

#course #college #week
Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Ajaib and I am an Engineering student at your University. I am writing
this
 letter regarding my permission to take a week off
for
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 the current Physics course. Allow me to explain the details.
Firstly
, I am currently taking a physics course
that
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taught by Prof. John.
In addition
,
this
 course is 4 times a week
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this
 semester.
Secondly
, I had requested
to
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Prof. John to take a week off that start from next Monday. Unfortunately, Prof. John did not accept my permission. During my absence, I should
back
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to
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 Canada next Monday because both of my parents had an accident which I
told
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 by my neighbour.
Consequently
, I must come to Canada to visit my parents as soon as possible. I kindly ask for your assistance with my prompt. I would like your help to resolve my absences for
this
 issue. Yours Sincerely, Ajaib
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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