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The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.
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The bar chart gives information about how many
magazines
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 were sold in five different
countries
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 in
years
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the years
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 2003 and 2005, with estimated sales for 2007.
Overall
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, demand for buying
magazines
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 in
countries
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 A, B and C followed a downward trend, in comparison
country
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 D had an upward trend. On the other side,
country
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 E experienced fluctuations. Among
countries
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 A, B and C, B had the highest number in 2003 with 50
magazines
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 per person, which is followed by
countries
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 A and C with approximately 48 and 35
magazines
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, respectively. All of them experienced a slight decline with the range of around 3 to 5
magazines
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 in 2005,
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, the same amount of additional decrease is expected in 2007 as well.
On the other hand
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,
country
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 D's and E's sales grew by merely 2
magazines
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 in 2005
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 to others. Even though it rose up in 2005, the estimated number of products will be sold in 2007 is to be expected to hit the lowest point of around 4
magazines
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 per person in
country
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 E, which refers to a gradual decrease.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words magazines, countries, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Increases
  • Decreases
  • Comparison
  • Significant
  • Projected
  • Sales
  • Economy
  • Digital Media
  • Impact
  • Cultural Factors
  • Analysis
  • Future Trends
  • Market Conditions
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