Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by

some

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that all of the experts who are

specialist

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in different professional fields have to stay in that country which provides educational services for them all their lives and use their knowledge for developing those countries,

while

there are others who think these professionals must choose the

place

that they intend to live there in their life freely. There are rational arguments on

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both sides of

this

contentious topic which will be discussed in detail, followed by the personal writer’s view on

this

matter. On the

one

hand, somebody opines that experts have to live in that realm

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its government has put a considerable amount of time and public money into their education and professional advances because they have utilized that country’s estate education and government fund.

Due to

this

fact, they are the valuable capitals of that region and administrations

one

day invested in them and they had been hopeful that these trained individuals in the future will be productive for their countries;

therefore

, they should stay there and help to develop that

place

.

On the other hand

, the strong conviction of another group of people is that nobody can not and must not put limitations on personal decisions that citizens can take for their futures as far as those decisions will not be harmful to other dwellers. They firmly believe that people have the right to choose freely and the

place

where professionals would like to live is not exempt. every person

one

time will have

this

chance to live so

it

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should be able to go to every country that thinks

it

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can live there better and happier.

For instance

, a great number of middle eastern doctors, engineers and scientists are

decideing

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deciding

to escape from those bloody wars that exist there and immigrate to

western

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countries for living better in a

place

with a higher quality of life.

To sum up

,

although

views differ about

this

issue, it is my firm opinion that we are human

being

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and just we can live

one

time in

this

world so we must be able to choose our destinies freely.

In addition

, it would not be a fair policy that governments

keep

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specialists in captivity because

one

day they paid for them. The professionals are not authorities’ slaves.